User:Jcaine215/Generalized anxiety disorder/Hayelizabeth24 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jcaine215


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jcaine215/Generalized_anxiety_disorder?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Generalized anxiety disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
If you could figure out a way to kind of include "healthy dietary habits have been shown to reduce anxiety levels" with the sentence before hand that would help not make it so choppy and have a little more structure. Like you could say "Healthy dietary habits and physical activity has shown to reduce anxiety levels, whereas unhealthy dietary habits and little to no physical activity can heighten anxiety levels." Something to that effect would help give it more structure and bring it all together.