User:Jcaine215/Generalized anxiety disorder/TRAWEESU Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jcaine215


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jcaine215/Generalized_anxiety_disorder?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Generalized anxiety disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is interesting to me. I like that you are adding the recent information from the source about diet and how it positively impacts General Anxiety Disorder. That's definitely interesting and informative. It would go nicely as it's own category or near the end of the topic .I think this is a broad topic so I think you'll need to keep the edits and information you add very generalized or it can certainly be an extremely long topic. It's definitely a topic I think it would be interesting to have more information about the history of GED and also the heredity aspects. Additionally, perhaps more reasoning for why GED is found in the others. Looks like you are just getting started so I hope this helps.~