User:Jckmena/Crucian carp/Tamayadixon Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jckmena


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jckmena/Crucian_carp?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Crucian carp

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content being added is relevant to the topic and is a very good section that could be added to the article. This information give another view of life for this species and it was written well. The content is neutral. There is no bias or the text leading the reader towards one position or the other. Adding a new section about predator defenses can be beneficial and contribute greatly to this article. Reliable sources are given to help back up the new information added.