User:JclkB2016/Nyx/1347peaches Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MildActsOfMayhem


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JclkB2016/Nyx?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nyx

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reviewing the original article and the peer's sandbox, it appears that the article may be assigned to someone other than MildActsOfMayhem. When attempting to review the sandbox drafts, another user under the name of JcklB2016 pops up and they have not provided any edits to this article. However, when looking directly at the Nyx article off of the main Wikipedia page, it is obvious that the most recent edit was on 26 October of 2022. I am going to assume this was done by MildActsOfMayhem and base my peer review on this information. The article provided neutral. unbiased, but good information. It was easy to comprehend and follow. The article flowed really well between the different headers and I appreciated that there were examples from all sides of mythology portrayed within the article. The only criticism I have at this time is that the opening definition of Nyx seems to be a direct quote from somewhere, but is not cited as one. When looking at the bibliography page, I believe the sources chosen to support the article were perfect and followed the guidelines needed.