User:Jcorrad/sandbox

From Dr. Hildebrandt (June 27): Okay, (Assignment #22) so you decided that the stub you were working on really should not be a separate article, but rather an improvement on an existing article. That's a great realization. Do you think that the sources you've located would work in the existing article, rather than the stub you were researching? If I understand, the existing article on "keyed trumpet" could be improved by incorporated stub material, rather than separate articles?

From Dr. Hildebrandt: Good job on this so far, John! Glad you are identifying some potential articles.

Assn. #17

Trumpet Concerto (Haydn)

Assn. #18
 * 1) I chose an article on the Concerto for Trumpet in Eb by Joseph Haydn. I practiced and performed this piece over my years as a student.
 * 2) Not only is this in the stub list, at the very bottom of the article, it is mentioned that it is a stub and Wikipedia is asking for help to fill it out a little.
 * 3) After viewing a few other articles of a similar subject matter, the area that could use the most help is the form section. Other articles have a short synopsis of each movement. Wiki is also asking for better sources. There is only one and it is for the opening sentence.
 * 4) The single reference is linked to the site AllMusic. But it is a short blurb about the piece.
 * 5) The form or structure of the piece. Other articles have a full on description. And of course, more references.

Article short list

Fairly Odd Coaster

Trumpet Concerto (Haydn)

Cello Sonata No. 1 (Mendelssohn)

Assn. #19

I chose the trumpet concerto stub. The guide that will fit the best, in my opinion, is on art history. What this is isn't visual art, but, because it's still art, the guide lines were a good fit.

The stub can really benefit from some more sources. There is also a need for more substance.

Here is one source:

Dahlqvist, Reine. "Weidinger, Anton." Grove Music Online. . Oxford University Press. Date of access 24 Jun. 2021, < https://www-oxfordmusiconline-com.libproxy.siue.edu/grovemusic/view/10.1093/gmo/9781561592630.001.0001/omo-9781561592630-e-0000030023 >

and another one:

Carter, Michael. “HAYDN Oboe Concerto in C. Trumpet Concerto in E♭. Harpsichord Concerto in D.” Fanfare: The Magazine for Serious Record Collectors, vol. 32, no. 6, July 2009, pp. 379–380. EBSCOhost, search.ebscohost.com.libproxy.siue.edu/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=40505999&site=ehost-live&scope=site.

Assn. # 21

first source for Cello sonata:

Dixon, Gavin. “MENDELSSOHN Cello Sonatas 1 and 2. Piano Trio No. 1 (Version for Flute, Cello, and Piano).” Fanfare: The Magazine for Serious Record Collectors, vol. 44, no. 3, Jan. 2021, pp. 291–292. EBSCOhost, search.ebscohost.com.libproxy.siue.edu/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=147287532&site=ehost-live&scope=site.

And the second one:

Todd, R. Larry. "Mendelssohn(-Bartholdy), (Jacob Ludwig) Felix." Grove Music Online. . Oxford University Press. Date of access 24 Jun. 2021, < https://www-oxfordmusiconline-com.libproxy.siue.edu/grovemusic/view/10.1093/gmo/9781561592630.001.0001/omo-9781561592630-e-0000051795

Assn. #22

Trying to edit.

I'm a little concerned about this one. This is almost a stub in a stub. I thought that it just needed some citations, however; after reading this section several times and trying to find sources on for it, I came to the conclusion that it is un-necessary to the point of being removed and replaced with something different. It's a rewording, almost, of the keyed trumpet article that is it self not a fill article. I think it would be better as a first performance snippet than what it currently is. I currently lack the courage to flesh that out at the moment. I know that I didn't really do the assignment as asked. I'll take the hit, but I can't make what is on there better. I must take the time to make the article more coherent.

Although written in 1796, Weidinger first performed the concerto four years later an March 28, 1800.