User:Jcurtis4/Human services/Plubell Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jcurtis4


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jcurtis4/Human_services?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Human services

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like how the user updated the page to fix for proper grammar to help make this wiki article flow better, however I do not feel this is a big enough contribution to this article as a whole. While only 2 new sentences where added to the article toe writer can add more information then just fixing clerical errors like grammar and a citation. However there was good use of citations throughout most of this article.