User:Jcw379/Ostern/WWWWFWF Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

jcw379


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jcw379/Ostern?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The overall draft seems pretty well, the lead of the article described the basic meaning and source of Ostern, and the first part of the article introduced the background of when Ostern occurred. Also, it is good to see that you quote many different sources.

But I'm wondering if mentioning one film using several paragraphs is good even though it is the first Ostern in the world. Other pages on Wikipedia introducing other kinds of films usually do not do the same thing. They did mention some films but did not specifically give them a particular part to introduce their content and influence. Other than that, briefly introducing how Ostern developed during these years may be a good idea.