User:Jderrico2022/Bathymodiolus thermophilus/Chris7M Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Isabelle Chan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jderrico2022/Bathymodiolus_thermophilus?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bathymodiolus thermophilus

Evaluate the drafted changes
Minor grammatical errors:

- 'Distribution' section citations should be included after the punctuation, not between the last word and punctuation.

- 'Evolution and Phylogeny' section has a minor typo: chemoautotrphic

Content:

- The proposed edits of adding the sections on Distribution, Evolution and Phylogeny, and Life Cycle added a lot of great information to the article.

- The sources all look good and the content is all well paraphrased.

- The Distribution section has a lot of information concerning the survival of gill symbionts when the mussel is not near active hydrothermal vents. Would this information not fit better in the Biology section, where there is more on the symbiotic relationship that allows Bathymodiolus thermophilus to survive?

- Diversifying sources could also add a lot to the proposed edits. The Life Cycle and Evolution and Phylogeny sections seem to use information from singular sources, so adding different sources for these topics would be helpful. I realize there may be limited research/information out there regarding this deep-sea mussel, so this could be challenging.

Tone and Balance:

- The added information is all neutral.

Overall impressions

- The article is definitely more complete based on these edits. Any wikipedia reader would gain much more knowledge regarding this organism if these proposals were added.