User:Jderrico2022/Bathymodiolus thermophilus/Jasminelee414 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Albarney


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jderrico2022/Bathymodiolus_thermophilus?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bathymodiolus thermophilus

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, the article right looks informative and provides much information about the Bathymodiolus thermophilus. Some of the information that is in the article that talks about chemosymbiotic bacteria and relationship with the species is repetitive and can get some grammatical and structural editing. Besides that, there is much helpful information that is provided about the relationships that the bacteria has within the fish's gills to oxidize hydrogen sulfide. I think that the sections that the group has in the article right now are great, and think that if they were broken into subsections, it could be helpful as it could separate more of the specifics of the topics for the paper, but also to be wary that sometimes subsections can increase in confusion. Overall, the article is off to a great start!