User:Jderrico2022/Bathymodiolus thermophilus/L.J.Rogan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jderrico2022


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jderrico2022/Bathymodiolus_thermophilus?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template (Links to an external site.)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bathymodiolus thermophilus

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you've done an excellent job incorporating your information into the already existing structure of the paper. I would just add citations to the end of every piece of information that you included (assuming that your edits are grouped by source) but other than that there's not much that I would say to do differently. I would just add that I think you did a great job keeping a neutral tone and only adding facts to the page, so I would continue to do that and just make sure that nothing you add is speculative or assumed. Great work.