User:Jdgoffard/Hemisquilla californiensis/CrimsonJF Peer Review

General info
Jdgoffard
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Jdgoffard/Hemisquilla californiensis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Hemisquilla californiensis

(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The current version does not separate the paragraph on mantis shrimp vision from the behavior section. The current lead does not address the information present in sections under it. While the range is mentioned little else about the ecological role of this shrimp is included. These would be good places for Jdgoffard to start expanding the article. The addition of more detailed range information and sediment preferences are nice but it could still use more diet information, mating info, or life cycle information.