User:Jdk22/Zirconocene bis(trimethylsilyl)acetylene pyridine/Ephineprine Peer Review

General info
Joe
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Hasn't uploaded yet; sent me a word doc with his article and am reviewing it from there:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Rosenthal's reagent

Lead
- bis(trimethyl)acetylene: is this meant to be bis(trimethylsilyl)acetylene?

- Good,concise introduction

Synthesis
- Reaction scheme for synthesis detailed would be helpful/illustrative

- References still need to be added

Bonding
- Maybe a more concise way to contrast the resonance structures (alkyne form vs. metallocyclopropane form)?

Reactivity
- Pretty comprehensive survey of reactions with the complex

- "The original creation of [complex]" - would a subsitute for creation work better? Like synthesis

- "Both reactions lose" - lost? As rest of description is in past tense

- End of second paragraph: Selenium is capitalised while other elements aren't

- Link to transmetallation wiki page where it is mentioned would be useful

- 5th paragraph: reagent's missing apostrophe

- Nice figures

- "a zirconium oxygen bond formed simultaneously forming a new carbon-carbon bond" would benefit from comma after simultaneously