User:Jdmia

About Me
My name is Simple Ann DeJesus. I am 32 years of age. I was born and raise in the Philippines which is located in Southeast Asia with 7614 islands then migrated to United States of America when I was 20 years old. I am happily married and been blessed with 2 beautiful kids. I am currently enrolled at Everett Community College taking pre-nursing. I am very interested in farming. I own a farm and raise goats and poultry animals. I have 2 cows for my personal consumption and couple sheep too. I like talking to people. It is my way of de-stressing from my hectic life.

My Wikipedia Interests
My interest in Wikipedia started because of my professor in English. I like to explore science articles specially the one’s pertaining to medicine. I also like searching and reading articles about kids, on how to raise them well and ways to help them better themselves and their future. Lately, I found my self searching about raising goat and herd health.

Article Evaluation
I have been interested with goats for sometime. I raise goats so I have been reading multiple goats and websites. I visited Wikipedia's page about goat thinking that it has the best coverage it can have and I have found three aspects of it worth commenting on: lack of citation, presentation of topics and lack of reliable resources.

Citation
The showing section of the article completely does not have any citations, and religion, mythology and folklore part of the article needed more citations for verification. This goes on to the rest of the article, where citations are needed but its not sources. It is hard to verify the content if there is no citation of the source of the information given. It also uses its own subheading as a source instead of citing the real source.

Presentation of Topics
I found the article topics presentation to be scattered. Some aspects were put on a heading where it should have been a sub heading to the previous topics. It would have been easier to read and understand the article if the idea is presented in a chronological order and group accordingly. The "tan" word used to describe goat appearance should be color because not all goats are tan. Some are black.

Lack of Reliable Resources
There are lots of references, but I found that there are still a lot missing. Different kind of goat have different major website and the author describes the differences of the kind of goats but fail to refer or cite major websites and publications about the specific kind of goats. I also found a dead ended reference, which makes it hard to verify the information and the source anymore. I found a link that refers back to one of the content of article that also have no resources cited instead of citing a reliable source of information.

Summary
Overall, I found the article to be okay. The scope of information provided still painted the background and touched the important aspects of goat. Even though the idea should have been presented better and in group such as the reproduction should be a sub heading of Anatomy and Health not its own heading. The heading Diet and subheading Digestion and Lactation should be combined because those two topics are inseparable and are both related when it comes to goat health. The “tan” word should have been changed to color in order to understand the idea better. Multiple paragraphs all throughout the article are missing or lacking citation, and some only have very few. Some information are missing which could have been a great help to picture the use of goat and its heard health.