User:Jdnorton/Hydrated silica/Sggeer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jdnorton


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hydrated silica
 * Hydrated silica

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the changes you have made so far have greatly improved the overall quality of the article by adding much-need content and additional sources. In terms of recommendations for further improvements: one thing I would recommend is perhaps a reorganization of the sections. For example, you could lump the flame retardant and toothpaste content under a header that says " Uses". Alternatively, you could simply move the "Use in toothpaste" section to be right above the flame retardant section. The only other thing I would do is add a citation for the silica gel sentence in the lead section. Great job overall!

-SG