User:Jdomi020/Tugen Hills/Orosas Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jdomi020


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jdomi020/Tugen_Hills?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Adding more references within your article will help a lot. Adding pictures would be a nice visual. Some sentences need review but overall grammar is good. Not too biased. Good start.