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Tutorial One

Today’s Date: 19/03/2019

Article name: Seattle Sounders FC

Number of page views in last 30 days: 28,601

Daily Average of page views: 923

Total number of edits: 36

If I had created the article of chocolate first, I would change the layout of the page by dividing the whole article into different sections so it might help the reader to read easier. If I were the second reader, I would insert the pictures of chocolate to make the article more straightforward, so people who have no clue what chocolate looks like can have a general idea. I would find some attractive pictures of chocolate to grab the reader's attention and convince them that chocolate is delicious. Also, I will introduce the different types of chocolate, and the usage and consumption of that chocolate.

Tutorial 3: Activity 1

Hercule Poirot:

This article has been rated as B-Class on the project's quality scale. To enhance the rating, firstly we need to add more details about Poirot's life. Although he is a fictional character, I believe that the author introduces Poirot's life story which can be cited and paraphrased in the article. Also, the article page is a little bit overloaded of texts; hence a long paragraph can be divided into different small sections, so it might make the reading easier.

Activity 2: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Citation_needed#Citation_needed

Week 6

"Gender Pay Gap in Sports"

The gender pay gap in sports looks into the persistence of unequal pay in sports, particularly for female athletes who do not receive equal revenue compare with their counterparts.