User:Jeades18/Benefits of physical activity/Kbaird17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jeadus


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jeades18/Benefits of physical activity - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Benefits of physical activity - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey Jeadus!! Here's my peer review for you,

Lead


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? A lead has not been added to reflect new changes, so I'm certain assuming this is a region you are focusing on editing or presently/If you are as yet still working on it, I would ensure you basically add a note on your draft page saying that you are right now attempting to develop this region.

Content

Overall impressions
 * Is the content added up to date? Yes, many of the articles you've added into the article are fairly new (from the 2000's)
 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? /How can the content added be improved? It's a little hard to tell right now, I see you've added a few new citations and added a new section. Since your citation mostly focus on sleep you should add a section on sleep and how it affects the mind.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? Adding the Sleep quality section will really benefit this article. I will give insight on how the brain works when you get enough sleep and when you don't get enough sleep.