User:Jeades18/Benefits of physical activity/Lancemason7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jeades18


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jeades18/Benefits_of_physical_activity?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Benefits of physical activity

Evaluate the drafted changes
- I am not sure which parts you edited, so I am not sure what exactly I should be reviewing.

- If you put the edited sections into your sandbox then I could easily give you advice on ways to improve your article.

- I see that you have some citations already, so I would start gathering information from those that can relate and fit into areas of the existing article.

- Do not be discouraged!