User:Jeades18/Benefits of physical activity/TRAWEESU Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jeades18


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * I don't believe any editing has begun on this yet, unless I am mistaken.


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Benefits of physical activity

Evaluate the drafted changes
Are there edits or additions I don't see? Perhaps I missed them. I really like this topic and I was surprised physical activity and exercise are not considered the same thing. I think it would be good to offer a specific difference such as how it has been done, and then perhaps a "see also" would be helpful if someone were wanting information and did not know the difference. Also, it leaves me a bit confused because exercise and physical activity have basically the same health benefits, right? So perhaps touch on that information and why it is necessary to distinguish the two. Or, it is necessary to actually distinguish the two? The content is neutral and concise, but yet still a bit confusing how they have exercise and physical activity linked together, while dividing it at the same time.

I'm sure your additions and edits will make it great.

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