User:Jeanie.chan/Sustainable menstruation/Polarnatbear Peer Review

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Jeanie.chan
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Jeanie.chan/Sustainable menstruation
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Sustainable menstruation

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Jeanie! I think you are off to a great start considering how limited information the page has! I like how you mentioned the three different types of menstruation products that are currently used by women! I also like how you lead with a study! I would love to see more information about the study! All of your information is very clear and straight to the point, I really like that because it would make it easy for anyone to understand if they want to learn more about the topic!

You do a great job providing examples of what menstruation products are currently in use.

I recommend going into more detail about the pro and cons about each menstruation products effect on the environment! I think overall you just need to add a bit more detail, but you are off to a great start!