User:Jecarp155/Fordham Rams/MadisonWeathersby Peer Review

General info
Jecarp155
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jecarp155/Fordham_Rams?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Fordham Rams

Evaluate the drafted changes
The edits and additions you have made to the Fordham Rams Wikipedia page are overall really great. I think its great how much detail you use when describing specific events. I am not super educated on sports so i found all the links to be really helpful. You always had a link to more information whenever I though "what is that?" so that is great. You use a lot of specifics as well which I think adds a lot of dimension to your work. Specifics just also really help to set the scene for the reader. I think your writing is as neutral as it can be given that it is being added to a Fordham Rams page therefore it focuses more on Fordhams team's successes and journey rather then their competitors. Your reference looks solid and you can maybe add more as you go just to really support the information you are providing the reader. Overall really interesting read!