User:Jeffdnguyen921/Social studies/Sarahhelennicholson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jeffdnguyen921


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jeffdnguyen921/Social studies


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social studies

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi! Here are my suggestions


 * I like how you added a contents box
 * Hyperlink "Great Britain" to it's wiki page
 * What ages/grades have "social studies"?
 * "development in countries like the United States and others"
 * what are you referring to by "others?" all other countries? only developed countries?
 * The second paragraph under the history section is great! it adds so much relevant context
 * Maybe go more into what students learn in social studies?
 * Who teaches social studies? what type of degree is usually relevant?

Overall, you're off to a great start and I think just the more information you can add the better. I look forward to seeing how your article progresses!