User:Jeffers.s9/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Princess Alexandra of Greece (born 1968)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose the article because Princess Alexandra of Greece was an art collector, which I think is very interesting and I wanted to learn more about her. She also has some unique life experiences, such as graduating with a master's degree in fine arts from the New York Academy of Art. Additionally, there is not much information on her so I think it will be a good article to evaluate.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section


 * The introductory sentence is good, as it outlines who the article is about, and her title and roles.
 * The rest of the paragraph is mostly focused on her family life, but does not mention anything about her personal life or patronages, which are both sections in the article.
 * It seems mostly concise, but is perhaps lacking some detail about the direction of the article.

Content


 * The content is relevant to the topic, and most of the content is up to date.
 * The article focuses heavily on her early life and family, less on her career and little on personal life and patronage. It seems that these topics could/should be elaborated on more.

Tone and Balance


 * The tone seems neutral, there is not subjective descriptive words in the article. There are no opinions on her character or what she has done, which is good.

Sources and References


 * Many of the sources are from more popular websites, such as Vogue, Forbes, the Cut, Vanity Fair and other blog type websites.
 * There are some academic and peer reviewed sources, but these are older sources. Most of the newer information comes from non-academic sources.
 * When investigating a link provided as a reference, there was no explicit indication of information about Princesses Alexandria being in the article.

Images and Media


 * The only image provided is one of (perhaps) a Greek royal symbol. It is not explained what it is.

Talk Page Discussion


 * There is no talk page discussion
 * It is part of WikiProjects such as WikiProject Greece, WikiProject New York City, and WikiProject Women Artists. They have rated the article as start-class and/or low importance.
 * An image of Princess Alexandria has been requested

Overall Impressions


 * The article is definitely off to a good start, but lots of work can be done.
 * It is underdeveloped- as more information can be added about Princess Alexandria's life, such as her contributions to charity and volunteering, and her work and businesses.
 * It could definitely use more pictures and add about her early life, as it focuses mostly on her family and her later career.