User:Jellocoup/Lissa Yellowbird-Chase/Cjones1015 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)

User:Jellocoup/Lissa Yellowbird-Chase


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jellocoup/Lissa_Yellowbird-Chase?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * no current version

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think your article is great! Very impressive that you are making an article from scratch, something I am not sure I could figure out. I think you have a very interesting topic and have started a good base that hopefully people will add on to in the future! I think your organization is great in the article and you set yourself up for success in that regard. You gave a good introduction to the topic that makes me want to do more research and learn even more.