User:Jellocoup/Lissa Yellowbird-Chase/MadisonFerguson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jellocoup


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jellocoup/Lissa_Yellowbird-Chase?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you all have a great start to everything! Maybe check the grammar at some parts, but overall it looks very good! I would recommend maybe inserting a table of contents, to make navigating the page easier if you add more information. - Madison