User:Jellocoup/Lissa Yellowbird-Chase/Wentl015 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jellocoup, Paisleysierra, Krogm029


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jellocoup/Lissa_Yellowbird-Chase?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.

I love that you chose to create a new Wikipedia article. Clear, concise, lead that describes the content of the article. Several run-on sentences in the "cases" section that could be separated into two separate sentences to make it easier to read. Some sentences that have been started but not completed, not sure if you plan to delete those or are going to finish them, but something to mention. Good organization of sections. It appears that you used a decent number of sources, most of which are secondary. I'm not sure whether it would be possible to find a photograph of Lissa Yellowbird-Chase, but if you could find one I think that would certainly improve the article. The information provided seems to be neutral and unbiased. Overall, good work!