User:JellyfishFan/Automated synthesis/Grapesszz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JellyfishFan, Kyraa.lien, MeganMezera


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JellyfishFan/Automated_synthesis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Automated synthesis

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * "Conversion from manual to automated synthesis" - the body under this subheading seems more like a comparison between automated synthesis and manual synthesis than a conversion


 * Under "Benefits of automated synthesis"- is "This also frees up chemists time to perform other tasks and can relieve mental exhaustion from elimination of repetitive tasks." necessary?


 * Dr. Amin hosted a webinar explaining how Chemspeed FLEX FORMAX technology has been used in “formulation design and performance optimization.” - maybe briefly describe the key points from the webinar (how automated synthesis applies in personal care products)
 * Under "Applications", a lot of attention is spent on polymers, maybe write about other areas like "renewables & energy research" etc?
 * The rest of the article seemed well explained!