User:JellyfishFan/Automated synthesis/Jlt156 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(MeganMezera, Kyraa.lien, JellyfishFan)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:JellyfishFan/Automated synthesis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Automated synthesis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

-Lead provides good overview and has been updated to account for new paragraphs on applications.

-First sentence defines automated synthesis clearly.

-Lead summarizes all the subtopics in the article concisely - it reads almost as if it is an abstract.

-No information is presented in the lead that isn't described in detail elsewhere.

Content

-Content is all relevant to the topic. I liked how you delved into a lot of detail for the applications and discussed many of them.

-All content is up to date and current.

-I think you could go into more detail with how automated synthesis is performed, since it is not mentioned in much detail until the section at the very end

-Are there any downsides to automatic synthesis that you can mention?

Tone and Balance

-All content is neutral, and no heavily biased claims

-Article is slightly weighted towards the applications of automated synthesis, but this makes sense considering this is where most of its use is.

-Article does not attempt to persuade the reader in one way or another.

Sources

-Some phrases need sources still; this is noted within the article.

-Good job at using reliable secondary sources such as peer reviewed articles for most of your content.

-Sources are written by a diverse range of authors.

-All links that I checked work.

Organization

-The article is well organized into subsections and the topic in a given paragraph is clear.

-Grammar of the paragraphs could be improved. Some paragraphs read awkwardly and have a lot of transition words in them -- minimizing these out would help improve readability of the article.

-I like how the applications section is very clearly broken down into many different subsections.

Images and Media

-I really like the chart that shows the difference between automated and regular synthesis, it was very helpful comparing the two

-I would include more photos of what automated synthesis actually looks like, as it is hard for the reader to visualize this.

Overall Impressions

-Article has improved significantly over original article and includes many applications of automated synthesis. Good job!

-Minor grammar edits and adding sources to some statements would help further improve article.