User:Jelotan/Stop motion/WikiWeh Peer Review

NOTE FROM COURSE INSTRUCTOR: Good points here - I agree that the sources could be updated and that claim about stop motion being mostly used in children's programming would be better if it was backed up - particularly since many of the references e.g. Tim Burton and others, are not necessarily children's movies. Also, if you are using the recent Pinocchio movie, it would be good if you highlighted the way 3D printing and robotics are also part of this new wave of stop motion. A lot of press around that.

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Jelotan


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The first two sources that you used seem like reliable secondhand sources that clearly show the director's intent and passion for stop-motion animation. However, the third article is a bit of a stub, and links to a youtube video that could easily go down in future. I would maybe consider looking for a written transcript of the interview or a separate, text-based interview with Wes Anderson.

Is it true that stop-motion is mostly used in children's programming? Is there some sort of citation to back that claim up? Robot Chicken is decidedly not a children's cartoon, and there are no other examples given. I appreciate that all the content has been updated with movies that are more recent. Are there any more recent stop animated shows you could draw from?