User:Jem1915/OLES2129

Task 1: I had a look at the wikipedia page on Spartan Ephors. If I had created the wikipedia page first I would have: - Structured it thematically e.g. military role, religious role etc. - Referenced historical information more accurately - information about the ephors being referenced to primary sources, and interpretations of the ephors and their role being sourced from secondary sources. - Referenced contextual information If I were to edit the article I would: - Broaden the information provided - Provide information regarding some of the historical debates (being careful to exclude my own analysis) - Included dating of sources cited, as the description pieces together a narrative that is sourced many hundreds of years apart

Task 2: I added a citation 13 on the page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Laconophilia#Contrary_views.

Task for Tutorial 4: I found it very helpful because it made it clear how to present your ideas with clarity on Wikipedia. It also made me feel more confident with preparation for the assignment.