User:Jemanly/Early childhood education/Ummtahanan18 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jemanly


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jemanly/Early_childhood_education?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Early childhood education

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * The article is relevant to the current version of the article, however, I am a little confused on which part you have decided to add on to or edit.
 * There is no lead in your draft.
 * The article is neutral since there is no claims that is heavily biased, everything seems factual.
 * No views are under or overrepresented.
 * The citations are all footnotes, not citations that can lead to the direct article you got your information from.
 * You could expand a little more on your draft including additional citations.
 * Each fact are appropriate and everything is up to date.
 * Overall, you can add more to your draft and your citations.