User:Jemappellecaitlin/Genetic discrimination


 * This is the sandbox we are working in :)
 * Assessment of the page
 * We think there are some under-developed sections that should be added into the article page. We think more worldviews should be included, marriage inequality of disabled people, research on pre-existing conditions and healthcare denial (genetic discrimination), address the race section by adding some perspectives from class (racial discrimination disguised as genetic diseases, physical illnesses, mental illnesses, etc).
 * More popular culture
 * More history of genetic discrimination exercised in the past
 * More *sources*
 * Eugenics topic coverage (?)
 * Population control and sterilization (genetic discrimination)
 * Developing the definition of genetic discrimination to be more multifaceted and applicable
 * Supporting this with any sources is always great!!
 * https://www.pharmacytimes.com/view/what-is-genetic-discrimination-and-how-can-it-affect-us
 * https://www.sciencedirect.com/topics/medicine-and-dentistry/genetic-discrimination
 * https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/B9780124047488000241

Prof Comments
YES great comments here, you two! I would add this source that deeply unsettled me earlier this summer ---https://www.nytimes.com/2021/05/15/us/african-americans-sickle-cell-police.html. When you transfer these notes to the talk page, can you elaborate a little bit on some of your bullet points, like make them into a sentence that would make sense to a new reader, so that they could take you up on the suggestion? Also, check around for existing wiki pages for some of the topics you want this article to address, so that there won't need to be duplication of effort unnecessarily, but rather a "link out to" which can also serve as an opportunity to "link in to" this page (which incidentally would drive traffic and visibility)... Also check out the latest comment on the talk page and engage with it as you see fit in your comment. What you would want to do after that is to first, of course, contextualize and frame your comment in terms of who you are and what our course is... thank you!! Liliput000 (talk) 15:17, 1 July 2021 (UTC)