User:Jen.ellis/Agony in the Garden (Bellini)/Ahhowey372 Peer Review

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Jen.ellis
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The article is, overall, very effective in describing the painting, its subject matters, and its themes. I think for concision's sake it may be helpful to combine the two parts in the "Description" section into a single part to avoid possible redundancy, as well as to make your description of the painting's subject matter, which is already very thorough and well-written, even clearer. I would also try, if possible, to flesh out your lead a little more to help it serve as a stronger summary of the article as a whole. though I recognize that this may not be plausible. Finally, I love the interpretation section of this article, and I think it serves its purpose very well. Great work so far!