User:JenOttawa/Talk Page Template

'''Here is a template and a brief guide for posting on your article's talk page. Examples are given for communicating different types of proposed changes. For suggesting paragraphs or sections of text, it is suggested that you put a link to your sandbox in the talk page. Unlike Wikipedia articles and sandboxes, talk pages do not use the visual editor, you will be editing using "wikicode".'''

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Template:
"Hello, we are a group of medical students editing this page as part of our class assignment. We have compiled a list of suggestions to improve this article and would appreciate community feedback before we proceed with these edits. Here is a list of our suggestions:


 * 1) We propose to insert the following content into the Peanut Allergy#Diagnosis section: (quote sentence you plan to add, please remember to paraphrase, no direct quotes permitted). (note: use the PMID tool to insert your reference. Instructions for inserting references using the PMID citation tool are found here: WikiProject Medicine/How to edit
 * 2) After consulting with MEDMOS we propose to make the following changes to the structure of the article (order of headings, heading name changes, remove a section, etc)
 * 3) We propose to create a section called Signs and Symptoms. Our proposed paragraph and references can be found in the following sandbox: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JenOttawa/sandbox (NOTE: don't forget to try to use a reference after every sentence, references can be re-used in an article).
 * 4) We noticed that reference # 35 is a primary source. We could not find any WP:MEDRS sources that can be used as a replacement, so we propose to remove reference 35 and the two sentences that use it as a citation.

''List all of your suggestions and sandboxes. Delete all previous work/practice edits from your sandbox to make it easier for people to find your work.''

You can close your talk page post with a polite note of "thanks" and let the community know that you are appreciate their time and welcome any feedback or suggestions that they may have.

 Sign your page with 4 x~ (~) this adds your Wiki signature like this JenOttawa (talk) 23:54, 30 October 2017 (UTC)