User:Jencool17/Woods and Caples General Store/ChrisBranch1999 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jen Cool


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jencool17/Woods_and_Caples_General_Store?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
To me this article is already fairly great as it is. I personally like it when an inconspicuous place has so much history following it. I appreciated how you walked through each time the store had changed hands, it seems like there was some very good documented history of that store. Your architecture section as well does a good job at talking about the building itself, but my only suggestion would be that if you have any more sources to pull from to try and expand on it just a few more sentences to give it the same length as your other section. That's not to say either is more or less effective or better or worse, just may help the article stand out more overall. Your lead as well works well to set the stage for the rest of the article and gives enough information to stand on its own.