User:Jenct93/Affective disposition theory/Spritestar Peer Review

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(Jenct93)
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Affective disposition theory

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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead: It doesnt have a brief explanation of the main parts of the article. It is concise and I agree with what you took out.

While reading through I got stuck on the sentence that starts with "Entertainment Users". Im not sure what is meant by that and it might need to be replaced with something else.

Content: It seems all relevant and up to date. There was only one thing I questioned being put in there and it is down below.

Tone: It is all neutral and I dont see any bias toward any position. Some categories seem to have less information in them and could use a little more in-depth definition.

Source: All content and claims are backed up by legitimate sources. Very good job of citing everything you wrote.

Organization: I feel like the article reads well and it well organized.

Overall: I feel like the article is more complete and understandable thanks to your input. Strengths: lots of categories, maybe add some examples as well

Application of theory: First two sentences seem to say the same thing. The paragraph is a little hard to follow because it might be a bit wordy. I understand what it is saying but I had to reread it a few times.

Zillmans Model of Forming Dispositions: First sentence, "Zillmann (1996) offered a model of disposition formation" [which is defined as] " a model beginning with a character's behavior and ends with approval of the story."

Raney's Contributions to the Theory History and Application: 3rd sentence, change theorist to theorists. "Sapolsky's research (1980) found that viewer race rather than the previously mentioned "morality" was an accurate predictor in team favorability in an all-White versus all-Black basketball game."- not sure why this is mentioned as it doesnt seem to go with what is currently being talked about. "The traditional Disposition Theory is closely related to misattribution theory of humor."- explain how or what is theory of humor. "By employing this perspective, the audience does not experience real emotion towards the events in the narrative, but rather experience(s) suspense instead."

Media Uses of Affective Disposition Theory: Maybe start with small intro sentence describing what you are going to talk about.

"This uses Affective Disposition Theory to justify liking a flawed character (who is) doing something accepted(?) for other moral reasons.- doing something that is generally unaccepted by society for moral reasons instead of nefarious ones? "The actions of an immoral character can be rationalized by explaining their behavior(.) (The audience can then understand and accept the characters actions) to understand and take the character's actions, even if it was theft or violence." "Exploring the role of identification and moral disengagement (does what) in the enjoyment of an antihero television series."

Character Development or Drama: "If a character is not developed or planned in a way (they)- (who is they) want, the resulting opinion effect of the character is undetermined based on liking or dislike."

'''Emotional Processing – Applied to works of fiction, this allows a reader to constantly judge and process the main character(s) based on moral choices of good and evil (to determine and, based on the moral judgment, infer that information on the characters' moral ethics is they are good or bad)- hard to understand. "If the character exhibits negative behaviors, the hatred for the character expands, and l likewise, honest characters are seen as good as their behavior supports the viewer's judgment."'''

Entertainment education – The application of stories where the television show or media add a moral or planned lesson to change public opinion using regular show programming to become educational for the topic of choice.- too long of a sentence

Moral Judgement is when characters get prescribed outcomes from (moral judgment)- try to define without using specific term- to the hero or antagonist.