User:Jenkennings/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Khan Murjan

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
The Khan Murjan is a building in the capital of Iraq, built in the 14th century and renovated since. The article uses vague language and is short for a building of this caliber of notability.

Evaluate the article
The first sentence reads, "The Khan Murjan...is a building in the souq of Baghdad, Iraq." "Souq" is linked to the Wikipedia page "Bazaar," which mentions that a bazaar can be "transliterated as souq." This diction can be made clearer.

The second paragraph of the lead section reads, "The building was reputedly in a state of disrepair..." "Reputedly" can be changed or deleted for clarity.

In the History section, the capitalization of "khan" is inconsistent. The overall structure of History can be altered for cohesiveness, and more information can be added.

Additionally, references can be updated and better sources from peer-reviewed articles should be cited.