User:Jenkennings/Khan Murjan/DfbJZ Peer Review

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Jenkennings
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 * Khan Murjan

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The article does a very good job of providing context to topic-specific vocab, such as caravanserai, which is an inn for merchants. Another example is defining the word khan, which turns out to be another word for caravanserai. Furthermore, the tone is neutral, which is beneficial for an explanatory article.

I would suggest that the author provides more detail about the museum of Arab antiquities and what kinds of artifacts it has within it. Additionally, if there are available images of artifacts, or even the interior of the building, those would be useful in providing a more comprehensive understanding of the site to readers.

I think I could incorporate a "gallery" section into my Wikipedia site as well, as I think it would be interesting for readers to see what the Saudi Women's football league looks like in action.