User:Jenkinsjz/Energy democracy/Katieebinger Peer Review

I love this topic and I think the article is really well written! I think you can break it into a clear lead and then subsections more if you would like. I could see a "history of the movement" section as well as breaking down the end of this quote "leaving fossil fuels in the ground, socializing and democratizing the means of production and changing our attitude towards energy consumption" to have sections for each of these four points. There could also be an example section where the German example is flushed out more. You do say "many consider" when referring to the German transition, which I think we were supposed to stay away from, but otherwise I really liked this example.

I think this is a great start, and I see each paragraph really as an opportunity to expand this article to be more robust, but I think for the confines of this class and our assignment, the length and depth are great. Really happy you started an energy democracy page on Wiki.

Lots of good sources, some sources clearly from campaigns, but I think given your balance with good sources, it's okay.

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