User:JennaLankford/Megan Rapinoe/Lauradeane3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:JennaLankford/Megan Rapinoe


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JennaLankford/Megan_Rapinoe?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
You did a great job of properly citing the article within your content. The content also reflects what the article noted. The links to the article worked and the article itself is up to date. I would work on finding a more exhaustive list of sources to backup your information to meet the wikipedia's "notability requirement." The content you added about the "shebelivescup" is something I think is relevant to the topic. I also think you did a nice job by stating this "came as a shock to many" and not using a general sweeping statement that all individuals were shocked to remain neutral and unbiased. Overall a nice start!