User:JennaLankford/Megan Rapinoe/Mageeking Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JennaLankford


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JennaLankford/Megan_Rapinoe?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Megan Rapinoe

Content

 * This is a great subsection to add!
 * Maybe talk a bit about what the SheBelieves cup is (or link its Wikipedia page)
 * Consider adding a sentence about this in the lead
 * Change "that has" to "that have"
 * Change "that won gold... Olympics" to just "gold... Olympics"

Tone and Balance

 * You have some biased wording in your contribution, including:
 * "Came as a shock to many"
 * "They are the most notable"
 * "Had many questioning"
 * Referring to them as "stars"
 * If you need an idea of what's biased vs not biased, see the peer review training
 * Try not to let the biased wording of the article you pulled from influence your wording, just report the facts

Sources and References

 * Your sources look good, you just need to write on all of them in your draft

Organization

 * Where will you put this in the article? Maybe make a note of this in your sandbox

Overall Impressions

 * I think this is a notable contribution, and recent!
 * Just make sure your language is unbiased