User:Jennagyee/Ahna Skop/Ericaslcheung Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jennagyee


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jennagyee/Ahna_Skop?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The side box is great! Super concise and useful information. Perhaps a more professional picture?

I think the early life section can be trimmed. For example, "The family's love of art may be attributed to both of her parents' love of art." can be cut possibly. I also think mentioning the parents first, then the children would be more intuitive.

Are there hyperlinks to more things in the career or research section? I think links there would be helpful for the reader (if anything piques their interest)

I think a box for honors and awards would be helpful.

Separations or subheading of the Artistic Endeavors section would be helpful

Nice work!