User:Jenneizzay/Dr. Carolyn Barcus/Historicleaf Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jenneizzay



Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

Your lead paragraph provided a good description of your person in a very concise way.

Content

Your content was relevant to the topic I believe you added information in a concise manner but allowed the reader to get a full understanding of your person.

Tone and Balance

Felt that you kept a neutral tone throughout the article.

Sources and References

You used secondary sources that seemed reliable.

Organization

Thought you organized your article well. Felt that it flowed well throughout and was still concise and efficient.

Overall Impressions

Overall, I think you crafted a great article. Felt that you did the person justice with what you reported. If you wanted to improve the article, you could go into their research more, but felt it was efficient overall.