User:Jennysaensouk/Pink tax/May.mach Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jennysaensouk


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jennysaensouk/Pink_tax?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pink tax

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Information that was added to the first section of the sandbox does a good job on expanding the views of pink tax in different countries. This information includes statistics that help create a clear visual image of numbers when it comes down to pink tax and its products. Both statements are cited correctly and both sources are credible enough to be used on Wikipedia since they are United Kingdom government websites.