User:Jennyzwerl4/Alcohol and Relationships/Divdiv25 Peer Review

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This article draft does a lot of things well so far. After clicking on the links to the references and briefly skimming them, it is clear that they are reliable strong sources, which was impressive to me. I think the topic is a very good one, and a very important one. Alcohol can greatly impact and change relationships. I think the organization of the lead is good, you start by talking about the role alcohol plays, how alcohol prevalence is changing, etc.

The article body will discuss how alcohol plays a role in initial attraction and perception, I think you should focus a lot of time here because it seems from the sources that first time interactions and attraction are majorly impacted by alcohol.

Make sure to take in account confounding variables; for example, certain cultures have different societal norms and expectations of alcohol.

I think to improve the article it would be important to define and make a clear distinction between alcohol and other substances that can influence the relationship. I definitely love how you are structuring your writing so far and how you are using bullet points, I will use that for my own drafting.