User:JeremyQuinn/be bold

Being bold is very important on Wikipedia.

Article Critique

The Globus Aerostaticus article's main problem is how little information there is. The information that is there is clear except for the role of the picture. The picture could be supported by more text either in the caption or in the normal text of the article. Although the information provided is not biased, it should be noted that the information being used only comes from one source.

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