User:Jerichorajninger/Criminal justice reform in the United States/Daniellesori Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Jerichorajninger


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jerichorajninger/Criminal_justice_reform_in_the_United_States?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Criminal justice reform in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Jericho, here's my peer review:

Lead


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? - Yes, the lead includes the content that is to be added to the article. Might help to include any citations that you may have used to refer in the work.

Content


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? - Your additions have new citations to the existing information on the article.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? - Yes, articles seem to be retrieved up-to-date.

Tone and Balance


 * Is the content added neutral? - Yes
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? - Might help to distinguish the additions to existing content, but from looking back from the original article, everything seems to be good!

Source and References


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? - In the lead, it might help to have a citation after the second sentence "Reforms can take place at any point where the criminal justice system intervenes in citizens’ lives, including lawmaking, policing, sentencing and incarceration."

Organization


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? - Yes
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? - Under the section "Sentencing regulation" there is an inconsistency in capitalizing "Sentencing laws" in the sentence after the first paragraph, and the first sentence in the second paragraph.

Overall Impressions


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? - Yes!

Warmly,

Danielle