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Article Evaluation "Nusantao Maritime Trading and Communication Network" The article starts very well telling us who developed the theory, what the theory says, and where and when it came from. However it does need a citation in order to gain credibility. More information on the history of the people and culture in this region as well as the history of the development of this theory will improve the quality of the article. The addition of alternate theories will also improve the article because it will show an unbiased opinion that mentions all relevant information about the topic. Lastly more detail about how this theory works and is used could be added to gain a better understanding of the theory as a whole.

Week 3

Added a sentence and citation #3 to "Nusantao Maritime Trading and Communication Network"

Week 4

Planned contributions to "Nusantao Maritime Trading and Communication Network": More information is needed on this article in all areas. Most important to add is the application of this theory and giving specific archaeological examples to support the application of this theory. More background on the theory can be given especially on how and why it was founded. As well as future application and what this theory tells us about the people of Southeast Asia.