User:Jersey gal202/Sawback angelshark/Mgr015 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

gal202


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jersey%20gal202/Sawback_angelshark?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sawback angelshark

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is no defined lead section. The general introductory section provides not much information. There should be a lead added that introduces the information and sections in the article. The content is relevant to the topic and up to date although there is not much information provided in the article. The sections are very well laid out, but clearly unfinished. All the information is provided in a neutral manner, and presented clearly and easy to understand. There are no images currently provided, and I suggest that some be added to enhance the article. There are also no references which should be added. Overall, this article is laid out very well, as the sections give a good rough draft for the article. The author should add more information to the sections provided, references, images, and a concise lead section to better the article.