User:Jeslyndv/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title Workplace wellness
 * Article Evaluation
 * No additions needed in my opinion for this article. It is very detailed and well researched by the community.
 * No additions needed in my opinion for this article. It is very detailed and well researched by the community.


 * Sources

Option 2

 * Article title Workplace health promotion
 * Article Evaluation
 * There should be more added to the workplace health promotion section. Bringing awareness while being impartial to issues and debates regarding small businesses vs large businesses, also I suggest bringing in low income workers and high income workers and the difference between the two. Looking into source below would help significantly.
 * Overall, the article is well cited and no grammatical errors are evident. It is clear.
 * Overall, the article is well cited and no grammatical errors are evident. It is clear.


 * Sources
 * Hammerback, Kristen, et al. "Perspectives on workplace health promotion among employees in low-wage industries." American Journal of Health Promotion 29.6 (2015): 384-392.

Option 3

 * Article title Occupational safety and health
 * Article Evaluation
 * Should include in the history section more improvement on occupational safety such as the supreme court decision listed below. Does need updates on growing changes in occupational safety and health. Protections for different workers based on class, gender, and race should be added in my opinion.
 * Overall, the article is cohesive just need to be updated. It is also impartial.
 * Overall, the article is cohesive just need to be updated. It is also impartial.


 * Sources
 * Faue, Elizabeth, et al. ""Fix the Workplace, Not the Worker": Labour Feminism and the  Shifting Grounds of Equality in the US Workplace, 1960–91." Labour History: A Journal of Labour and Social History, vol. 119, 2020, p. 93-114. Project MUSE muse.jhu.edu/article/777180. https://muse.jhu.edu/article/777180/pdf

Option 4

 * Article title Affordable Care Act
 * Article Evaluation
 * Could list the impact of the Affordable care act on statistics backed up in the workplace. However, the article is very detailed in asserting and neutral on the subject of the affordable care and does not lean on any particular bias. Subheadings are good and grammar as well.
 * Could list the impact of the Affordable care act on statistics backed up in the workplace. However, the article is very detailed in asserting and neutral on the subject of the affordable care and does not lean on any particular bias. Subheadings are good and grammar as well.


 * Sources
 * Anderko, Laura et al. “Promoting prevention through the affordable care act: workplace wellness.” Preventing chronic disease vol. 9 (2012): E175. doi:10.5888/pcd9.120092